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STRONG POINTS
- the lines are clean!^^
- features were properly placed and faces look good
-3/4 views are very nice
POINTS to IMPROVE
- the profiles look odd for the following reasons
the nostrils to chin area is too short.
if you try and observe people, that area roughly approximates a third of the face.
likewise, the forehead is 1/3, and eyes to nose area also 1/3 of the face. In your drawing these rules were followed, only the nostrils to chin has a problem.
-work on the symmetry of the face too. the front view has bias to the right which is very noticeable (it's okay to have very minimal bias hehehe)
OVERALL RATING
/5 please do a revision, although this is good. good luck!^^
also not the shape of the jaw is a slight arch with a hook at the end (try to observe people.)
- the lines are clean!^^
- features were properly placed and faces look good
-3/4 views are very nice
POINTS to IMPROVE
- the profiles look odd for the following reasons
the nostrils to chin area is too short. if you try and observe people, that area roughly approximates a third of the face. likewise, the forehead is 1/3, and eyes to nose area also 1/3 of the face. In your drawing these rules were followed, only the nostrils to chin has a problem.-work on the symmetry of the face too. the front view has bias to the right which is very noticeable (it's okay to have very minimal bias hehehe)
OVERALL RATING
/5 please do a revision, although this is good. good luck!^^ also not the shape of the jaw is a slight arch with a hook at the end (try to observe people.)