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GM: Task 7- Sophomore ET Redo2

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Task for :icongakuen-manga:

I am seriously not happy with those hands.
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STRONG POINTS
-linework- very clean and crisp
- good measurements of body parts
- shoulder area looks good.
- his left foot is great. :D
- good looking legs

POINTS to IMPROVE
- his face is too small for his head
- his trapezoidal muscles seem off, too sloping
- the abs did improve but now, they seem too "box" like, muscles generally have more curves to look organic. refs will sure help on this. check out the tutorial section to find some
- maybe the groin section looks too bulgy/ big. looks as if he's wearing diapers...
- right foot's sole is too rounded.

OVERALL RATING
- :star::star::star-half:/5 you are due for another revision. BUT that is for the next term. congratulations!
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