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GM: Task 9 - Poses 7 by EzzyAlpha GM: Task 9 - Poses 7 by EzzyAlpha
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mizz-izzy Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Overall the pose looks good. I think the right arm looks off though. I also like the flow of her hair, it helps add to the feeling of movement. :)
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Roselink-Noodle Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student
this is nice :) Try varying the oen pressure a bit more and fix the arm. It's the main thing throwing off the piece because of its placement and foreshortening is off. Good luck with the revision. :)
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Flaming-Noodle Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student General Artist
EVALUATION FORM:

Hi! This is Flaming-Noodle. I am here to evaluate your task for #Gakuen-Manga

STRONG POINTS
-visable pen pressure
-moderatly clean linework
-I really like this pose :D
-her torso and lower half look good
-the face is really good :)

POINTS to IMPROVE
-The shadow on her neck could be angles down towards her left breast rather than being almost straight across her neck.
-Her left arm seems awkward because it doesnt foreshorten right-almost like her shoulders aren't aligned with each other. Currently, her left one is aligned with the shoulder blade-and there is not shoulder. If this were adjusted it would be easier to note and fix the arm itself.

OVERALL RATING
:star::star::star: of 5 stars

Overall, this is really good and seeing this really got me excited-it's really good. The majority of the body flows nice with the postion it's in-with the exception of her left arm and shoulder. Her hip area is beautiful btw! :) But her arm does somewhat distract from her overall feel...

Congrats you pass. I would still suggest revising this to fix her arm and then moving on to the next task, but since you did pass-it's up to you if you'd like to revise this or move on to the next task. Best of Luck ^_^V
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EzzyAlpha Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Okay thank you, I think I will redo it, it should be a quick fix :D
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Flaming-Noodle Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student General Artist
lol ok ^_^V
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