Hi! This is Flaming-Noodle. I am here to evaluate your task for #Gakuen-Manga
STRONG POINTS -visable pen pressure -moderatly clean linework -I really like this pose -her torso and lower half look good -the face is really good
POINTS to IMPROVE -The shadow on her neck could be angles down towards her left breast rather than being almost straight across her neck. -Her left arm seems awkward because it doesnt foreshorten right-almost like her shoulders aren't aligned with each other. Currently, her left one is aligned with the shoulder blade-and there is not shoulder. If this were adjusted it would be easier to note and fix the arm itself.
OVERALL RATING of 5 stars
Overall, this is really good and seeing this really got me excited-it's really good. The majority of the body flows nice with the postion it's in-with the exception of her left arm and shoulder. Her hip area is beautiful btw! But her arm does somewhat distract from her overall feel...
Congrats you pass. I would still suggest revising this to fix her arm and then moving on to the next task, but since you did pass-it's up to you if you'd like to revise this or move on to the next task. Best of Luck ^_^V