This is fantastic! The line pressure makes it seem so dynamic and you can tell from the pose and the expression that she's throwing all of her weight behind the punch. I can't really think of anything to criticise here. This is really well done!
Hi! This is Flaming-Noodle. I am here to evaluate your task for #Gakuen-Manga
STRONG POINTS -visable pen pressure -moderatly clean linework -I really like this pose and the shading on her left hand is really good. -the face looks beautiful -Her left arm and the shadow on her neck look much better than before!
POINTS to IMPROVE -maybe cleaning up the linework on her breast and lower half of the jeans...but that's just minor
OVERALL RATING of 5 stars Well done! Please move on to the next task and Good Luck