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~mizz-izzy Oct 22, 2012
Nice fix on the arm. Looks really good!
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*omichanga Oct 22, 2012
I love it! I love the dynamic pose and the pen pressure is really well done...!
I'm gonna take some notes from your work :P
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~Roselink-Noodle Oct 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
nice fix on the arm :) Only thing would be the line work on her boob is a bit heavy and could be lifted a little. But the overall piece is interesting :)
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~sconesandpancakes Oct 20, 2012
This is fantastic! The line pressure makes it seem so dynamic and you can tell from the pose and the expression that she's throwing all of her weight behind the punch. I can't really think of anything to criticise here. This is really well done!
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~EzzyAlpha Oct 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Aah, thank you :D
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~Flaming-Noodle Oct 20, 2012  Student General Artist
EVALUATION FORM:

Hi! This is Flaming-Noodle. I am here to evaluate your task for #Gakuen-Manga

STRONG POINTS
-visable pen pressure
-moderatly clean linework
-I really like this pose and the shading on her left hand is really good.
-the face looks beautiful :heart:
-Her left arm and the shadow on her neck look much better than before! :D

POINTS to IMPROVE
-maybe cleaning up the linework on her breast and lower half of the jeans...but that's just minor :p :heart:

OVERALL RATING
:star::star::star::star::star-half: of 5 stars Well done! :D Please move on to the next task and Good Luck :heart:
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~EzzyAlpha Oct 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Okay, thank you :D
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~Flaming-Noodle Oct 20, 2012  Student General Artist
^_^V
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